We sat beneath a silver moon the night we kissed
the gentle ocean mist weaving through your hair
when your silken lips touched mine
was the day it seems
that I was born
Never will I forget how we held hands
both of us trembling
both of us scared
the scent of your cinnamon skin
the warmth of your voice
for me was heaven
Our hearts basking in the summer wind
as embers of an ancient fire
warming the souls of all who knew
of our love
Never will I forget your smile
both of us so vulnerable
both of us unsure
of this intoxicating place
this place called love
You are always in my heart . . .
For Adrianna
#1 by adriannaprejean at May 5th, 2007
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I don’t know what to say. I Love You!!!!!
You’re making me cry.
#2 by Lyn at May 6th, 2007
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How beautiful that is… excellent…
#3 by Beaman at May 12th, 2007
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Great poem. How to make a woman cry through poetry, I need to learn that. :p
#4 by Bobby Revell at May 12th, 2007
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This poem came from pure heartache
#5 by Lulu at November 5th, 2008
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awww now I am daydreaming! this is beautiful Bob
the touch of the moon / sunsets/ sunrises always melts my heart
#6 by Revellian at November 5th, 2008
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Thanks for reading my poetry Lulu! I wrote this for my ex a few years ago. If I fall in love, I get really inspired to write this type of poetry
#7 by Tammy-Cricket at May 6th, 2009
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As I was reading this I was wondering to myself if you still felt the same. I went on to read the comments. This is a beautiful poem.
My grandmother was a writer and I have found myself over the last couple of days drifting around to different sites of those that enjoy sharing wonderful words such as this.
#8 by Revellian at May 6th, 2009
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Thank you Tammy, it always makes me smile when someone reads my poetry. I do feel the same in the sense that I am and have always been a hopeless romantic
#9 by Tammy-Cricket at May 7th, 2009
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ah…aren’t we all.
#10 by Revellian at May 7th, 2009
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It’s nice to think so anyway:)
#11 by Tammy-Cricket at May 11th, 2009
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Yes, we can think what we want but I guess actions do speak louder than words.
#12 by Valerie at May 18th, 2009
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I have to say that after reading your fiction, I was highly curious to click something titled as “Always in My Heart” and you know, you really pulled this off! I love the “ocean mist weaving through her hair” and “hearts as embers of an ancient fire,” wonderful description.
Thanks for the comments. Yes, my influences seem a little conflicting, I think I’m still struggling to settle into the right genre/style.
I’ve never been to a writers group but I would’ve been very uncomfortable in that situation, too. I think that plots can be reused, as every writer approaches it differently and with unique writing styles. You must’ve been annoyed.
I love that your the first person to associate my writing with words like “bright” and “positivity!” Nice work with “Crypt of Suffocation” and “My Blood Red” – “burn in my tinctured scarlet, razor shredded” – simply memorable!
Val.
#13 by Bobby Revell at May 18th, 2009
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Your writing can be dark and brutal, but you have a positive vibe. I think writers of anything morbid, violent, gory or really weird are misunderstood. I had a woman tell me, “You write all this sick stuff because you’re filled with negativity and it will eat you up inside.”
I laughed because it’s fiction and has nothing to do with me as a person. I usually find dark writing humorous! This is such a simple little poem, but it did come from the heart.
Oh yeah, I can’t write specifically in one genre, so I don’t think about it. I just write by instinct.