Jan 04

There it was again…my peripheral vision playing tricks on me, this quivering black shadow. I turned to look - evaporating, producing a humid steam…an exhalation of pungent dead man’s breath. I tried to comprehend where I was, the shadows of confusion encrusting my reality…what the hell is going on?

Oh my God…the morbid stench splashed across my face…this breath…the shadow revealed itself once more. I was not alone, something was there, all around me. I felt it sheath my body, I was embedded…cradled in this continuum of darkness, the fabric of death itself.

Trying to walk, I was blistered by a vulgar twitch…losing my balance, cracking my knee caps on the cold floor. Before my eyes sat five starving children screaming in tortuous agony, “Please feed us…we are so hungry…”

The vile dank of death hung thickly…I gagged, my stomach churning…ughh…uggghh! Choking, I couldn’t get air in my lungs. I coughed up a thickened black slab of greasy strings. Urrggh…bleeech…I splatter vomited that which clogged my esophagus…ridding my body from this horrid portion of sickening gelatinous matter.

The children pounced like bloodthirsty dogs upon my still hot puke - suckling the blackened gristle from their bony fingers. Voices moaned, “Run…you must run!”

I was paralyzed, frozen in fear…I couldn’t squeeze a single drop of movement from my wilted, dying body…”Help me…PLEASE SOMEBODY HELP ME!!!!!” I bellowed violently. My undulating body quivered in absolute grotesqueness…”HELP ME…….!!!!”

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The five albino children gathered around me, blood drenched strings draping from their drooling jowls - vomit crusted, milk-white faces…one said, “I’ll do the honors…” he smiled at me, “For that which we are about to receive, may we be truly thankful…”

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Comment by Andy Bailey
2008-01-04 05:30:00

you really should stop walking around New York at night :lol:
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Comment by Revellian
2008-01-04 05:35:39

This is a true story Andy…I’ve never been to New York :shock:

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Comment by random magus
2008-01-04 06:24:30

I got the chills Bobby….
Happy New Year

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Comment by Revellian
2008-01-04 07:13:05

What? This was meant to be jovial and uplifting…something to read before dinner…hehe!!! Thanks Amber :grin:

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Comment by Mitchell Allen
2008-01-04 12:08:37

Hi Bobby,
Between this finger-lickin’ story and the blind date from hell, I think you’ve earned this:

You have been given a ROAR Award. Enjoy, and pass it on!

Cheers!

Mitch

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Comment by Revellian
2008-01-05 07:55:36

Thanks Mitchell! I may just participate :smile:

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Comment by menopauseprincess
2008-01-04 23:06:01

Bobby! l do need to get to sleep tonight you know! :shock:
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Comment by Revellian
2008-01-04 23:24:59

I am happy to do my part MP!!!! :mrgreen:

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Comment by EuroYank
2008-01-05 05:54:26

Bobby Revell, regarding your question go to my first post today at … (Who Controls the Government)
and thanks for your great support. I also admire your work. Lets keep in touch more often.

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Comment by Revellian
2008-01-05 07:46:01

Sounds good to me! That is a great post. I am inspired to write something riveting :mrgreen: Thanks Euroyank

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Comment by Chris
2008-01-05 08:33:39

Wow, what a story. That was a bit creepy Bob.
By the way I’ve given you an award and you can pick it up at my new blog at http://blog.werelivingwell.com/ (you know me from the dog log)

Thanks and hope you’re having a great new year.
Chris

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Comment by Revellian
2008-01-05 09:15:16

Thanks Chris!!!! I’ll come see :smile:

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Comment by EuroYank
2008-01-05 09:09:38

That is what happens to Americans that are not Republicans. They will eat you alive before they finally kill you!

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Comment by Revellian
2008-01-05 09:21:16

Hahahaha…hahahahaha!!!! I’m voting for Obama. I predict he’ll win, but he’ll probably be assassinated…just like JFK :shock:

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Comment by Speedcat Hollydale
2008-01-05 20:13:32

AAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!
Whew, that was one dark and scary story… (true story I hear). Before dinner reading sounds like a good idea. I will try it out at my next lunch break @ work.

Hey Bobby, I will give you some free chicken at my new buffet.
See U… Eric “Hollytown”

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Comment by Revellian
2008-01-06 00:15:53

I love chicken…preferably raw! Enjoy your meal Eric! :mrgreen:

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Comment by Genie Princess
2008-01-08 04:20:24

Hi Bobby! Even the picture here is freaking me out la! :( Where did u get the pic from?

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Comment by Revellian
2008-01-08 04:28:14

Haha…It was drawn by the Revellian family witch….muah hahahah :shock:

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