Comments on: The Fruity Pebbles Nightmare

By: Dotty

Dotty — Sun, 24 Aug 2008 16:11:56 +0000

I started thinking it was real and then went to “is this real” to “this can’t be real”. Great story

By: Ady J.

Ady J. — Fri, 15 Aug 2008 17:15:56 +0000

you write well…piece of advice: copyright this, compile , publish then sell…great read, will have space in my bookshelf…

p.s.
too bad for maria…

By: fYruityoaty

fYruityoaty — Fri, 15 Aug 2008 14:48:31 +0000

For a few seconds, I thought maybe you had a nightmare from eating a tainted bowl of Fruity Pebbles.

Good stuff, if not a bit gross.

By: Epoxy Garage Floors

Epoxy Garage Floors — Thu, 14 Aug 2008 14:17:21 +0000

What a story. Very well written. A little on the gross side though. Keep up the good work. I’ll definitely be checking back in to see what you do next.

By: Revellian

Revellian — Mon, 11 Aug 2008 17:21:34 +0000

Thanks Justin! That’s how a good beating should be…gruesome

By: Justin Airsoft

Justin Airsoft — Mon, 11 Aug 2008 13:44:33 +0000

Ha ha! At first I thought this was real, but as it gradually got more and more ridiculous, I’m like, “This is definitely a story!” I’m not too familiar with this blog yet, although it appears you do a lot of horror fiction. I gotta tell you, when the husband arrived and started with the beating, that was pretty gruesome.

By: Revellian

Revellian — Sat, 09 Aug 2008 07:38:10 +0000

@Debbie: Haha! Actually, no mold was used – I was freehanded

@Teeni: No…it was an all American, wholesome Beaver Cleaver laugh!

By: teeni

teeni — Sat, 09 Aug 2008 03:23:22 +0000

Yeah, I can picture you laughing while writing it. You know, the kind of Muhahaha type of laugh.

By: Debbie Dolphin

Debbie Dolphin — Sat, 09 Aug 2008 01:30:25 +0000

To borrow a cliche, they broke the mold when they created you, Fred Revellian

By: Revellian

Revellian — Fri, 08 Aug 2008 18:08:56 +0000

@Dan: I envision the story as if it is truth beforehand and write it as if I’m telling a true story. I run into trouble though – many times when I actually write a true story, people think it’s fiction. My post “Interview with a blind homeless man” was 100% true, but many of the stumble reviews believed it was all lies!

@Mitch: If this made you laugh, you are just as twisted as I am!!!!