Emerald beards of grass bladed sweet under apricot sky; cotton candy breeze, banana sun and warmth healing forlorn hearts–or tearing them apart. It was 6 AM. Too early for liquor, beer and millionaire golfers but I was the country club bartender. The gated community of Windance was stained with vicious rumors, ego-maniacal fools and blistering women. Mornings were nice–filling ice chests with Budweiser, Heineken and Coors–chatting with the early birds. The older ladies came in scented of coconut sunscreen wanting cups of water with lemon to perfume sulfured artesian.
Dr. Salinski slid his tattered big gulp plastic mug to me saying, “Fill ‘er up,” and I did–to the brim with Old Grandad 114 proof. His hands shivering whilst sweat glazed his oily forehead, a ragged John Deere cap sheathing his bald scalp. I filled an additional rock glass with Absolut vodka which he tossed down his wretched gullet–liquor flushed by oral toilet.
“Performing heart surgery on any children today Dr. Salinsky?”
“Not until 10, gotta get 18 holes in and steady my nerves beforehand . . . I couldn’t even hold a scalpel right now . . . until I get this medicine up in me.” He winked, tossed me a ten dollar tip and walked out.
This was the dark side of my job; knowing nasty secrets, searing affairs. back room sex, prostitution, drugs and wicked backstabbing. It was like any other bartending job. I never worked regular bars, just country clubs and casinos. I was between jobs. What it lacked in pay made up for in drama.
Around 6:30 I expected Natalie and Lisa to come in–two sixteen year old girls who came in daily to flirt with me, tell me about bad boyfriends, how they smoked pot and stole beer from their rich parents. I let them flirt, but was careful to not flirt back too much–thoughts of law suits, jail cells and shotgun wielding fathers trashing my scene. They were deadly beautiful, too young–but I enjoyed their company. Squealing giggles and jokes–I seemed to always have a funny line to brighten their summer vacation.
Natalie took her chances and brazenly asked, “So . . . when are you taking me out Bobby?” She smacked her glittery wet lips, hand on hip and posing.
“I can’t go out with you Natalie . . . you know that.”
Her mother walked in smiling at me. It was the Barbie goddess Sarah Smithson–the most gorgeous woman I had ever seen grace the lawns of Windance. She said, “Run on girls, I need to talk to Mr. Bobby.
“So you’re the Bobby my daughter has been talking about.” I gulped as she noticed my Adam’s Apple writhe. Oh my God . . . what did Natalie tell her?
“Yes . . . I’m Bobby,” and held my hand out to shake.
“Well, I was a bit worried. Natalie thinks she’s thirty and I had to know who she referred to. I’m happy to see you are a respectful young man, and the girls are just having fun.”
I took her hand and kissed it. I know not what possessed me to do that, but I couldn’t resist her. She wore a short-cut sunflowered tank-top, shrink-wrapped cantaloupes–tangerine bikini straps outcropped along tanned shoulders. Her bellybutton adorned by platinum piercing–blue jean shorts and creamy legs. She gazed into me as my eyes wandered her every delicious contour. She read me like a Dr. Seuss book . . . easy I suppose. I was never into one night stands and my heart still shattered by Amy–my true love who left me for a scumbag lawyer who knocked her teeth out. Maybe this was my big chance to fall in love with a goddess–or maybe used as a summer treat for a rich bitch. I didn’t know. I didn’t care.
“You can let go of my hand Bobby.”
“Oh, excuse me Sarah. I don’t know where my head is today.”
“I do. I know exactly where your head is–and where you’d like it to be.”
I was stiffer than scotch on Sunday morning, unable to hide protrusions as her eyes devoured me. She kissed my hand–painting me with raspberry lips.
“Tonight . . . Natalie is sleeping over at Lisa’s house to watch movies. I live in the big white house on the entrance curve to the right. There will be a silver BMW in the drive way. Be there at 7:00.”
“Shall I bring wine?”
I had served her many times and she asked, “What wine do I like?”
“You prefer Austrian wines made from Blauer Portugieser grapes.” My mind is strewn with endless cabinets of useful information.
“I am impressed.”
“It’s the same wine Mozart enjoyed.”
“You listen to Mozart? Come over at six instead.”
The following two weeks were incredible. I smiled like spring wind–my coworkers bewildered by my undying love for this shabby job. I was a basket case in waiting. I had become a boy-toy. I was so in love–or in lust–never questioning why she made me park in her garage and close the door. Sometimes she picked me up. Other times she bought a suite at the Marriot in New Orleans–the only time we displayed affection in public. We enjoyed several nights in the French Quarter; slamming lemon drops in Lucky Pierre’s, partaking cuisine at Commander’s Palace–the world’s best bread pudding–erupting in wild passion through balmy streets. We made love constantly; in the country club pool at 2 AM, on the fifteenth hole at midnight–moonlight kissing our souls–emblazoned bodies naked on silken green. Our love remained hidden from prying eyes. The intensity scorching as I wanted to live forever inside her–the best place I had ever been . . . my personal Shangri-La. Butterflies of sugared tone whispering in my ear, wet lips on mine–never more than five minutes clothed.
Perhaps I saw the heartache in the distance–to be jaded seemed like fantasy. Her long tongue kept me quiet. Her soft fingers made me moan. Never time for talking, only loving. We were hiding beautiful secrets–a tradition at Windance. Whilst on top making passionate love to me, her hands weaving tales of inferno . . . she voiced, “I love you.
“I love you too.”
It was a simple love based on nothing. No conversations besides fleeting thoughts about wine, love, how good it felt and how I desired her in every possible way. I envisioned us dying together in fiery embrace–engulfed in her sweet pinkness for all eternity.
Saturday arrived, time for the posh golfer’s dinner–served in courses like a French restaurant–mostly to make the members feel important. I spent my evening preparing Ketel One Martinis, Cosmopolitans–explaining the difference between Scotch and Irish Whiskey–my favorite whiskey–to drunken old geezers mesmerized by historical lore. My bartending partner Sandra left early, becoming dizzy after standing for two hours. Once midnight came I was allowed to drink too. I poured myself a Bushmills on ice and devoured grilled lobster with butter and lemon.
Sarah finally arrived, wearing a scarlet Valentino Couture evening dress, cherry lips and blond hair woven like sun-fire. Every man in the room breathless. The dining room sucked into a vacuum when she walked in–dead silence. She walked by me without so much a glance and began talking to Dr. Powell and Attorney General Walt Ladner. I asked Joan, one of the waitresses, to watch the bar so I could talk to Sarah. I was so in love, my vision tunneled and her face the only thing I could see. Her petite tone floated on a sea of voices and I honed in on her.
“Sarah . . . you look beautiful tonight.” I reached for a warm hug as evil scowl paved her eyes.
“Oh my God . . . Walter, tell this employee to get away from me. I don’t even know who he is.”
My face crawling in embarrassment, tears webbed my lashes and I was rejected. She didn’t associate with the help. Mr. Ladner could see through the looming fog of dismissal and winced a stare saying I feel for you. Nobody said a word as I walked off . . . trying to stand upright . . . fighting to not crumple to the floor a decrepit bag of sorrow. My legs rubbery and heart ripped from my chest, I walked in the mini-kitchen behind the bar and wept like an infant. I got sick and vomited in the sink. I should have known all along. How stupid could I be?
The crowd thinned as it approached 2 AM, but my hands were still trembling–forced to finish my shift–Sarah laughing and conversing with the in-crowd without a care in the world. She was a master actress with splintered lives and forked tongue. She pranced her beauty by the bar before leaving, a somber-sweet half smile, halved tear drops moistening her eyes and said, “I can’t believe you did that Bobby. You ruined it all. It’s over. Goodbye.”
I continued working there for a few more weeks and saw Sarah regularly–though she never spoke to me again. Her daughter never came in to talk to me after that. I’ve never shared this with anyone before. During our spectacular affair, I bit my lip refraining from telling the guys. I respected her. I loved her. And for nothing but pain and tortuous heartache.
And they say it’s only sex . . . get over it.
all names have been slightly altered to protect the innocent and guilty



#1 by Banno at February 8th, 2009
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Much as we’d like to believe in no-strings attached sex, the fact is that it doesn’t come without its emotional baggage.
It’s bad luck that you got scarred so badly by someone so blatantly ‘fork-tongued’ as you say.
#2 by Revellian at February 8th, 2009
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Agreed Banno. I always thought sex was supposed to mean something, but to some people it’s like tying their shoes.
#3 by Svasti at February 8th, 2009
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Oh wow. What a story.
Often its young girls who are utterly devestated by sex. But when its an older woman, I don’t know that a young boy stands a chance… poor younger you!!
And once you’ve felt something so intensely, there’s no going back, no pretending the shallower version of sex and love is okay.
Life is so strange isn’t it, when we don’t understand someone else’s rules?
She told you ‘you ruined everything’ and I’m sure that had an impact on you. How cruel and unkind to a young heart!!
#4 by Revellian at February 8th, 2009
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Thanks Svasti,
Yes…she was ten years older than me but I’m one of those people who strongly associate sex with love–or I don’t want sex unless I’m in love. It’s so funny, I fall in love far too easily and cannot disassociate sex from love . . . to me they are one in the same. Perhaps I’m naive or idealistic–it’s just how I am.
She laid the rules and was in command. I wonder if somewhere in her cold heart she ever actually loved me. It sure felt like it and I wouldn’t trade the pleasure/pain memory for anything
#5 by Miragi at February 8th, 2009
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Bar-tending can be a wicked painful job sometimes. I don’t know what’s worse…the rich or the traveling salesmen….either way you know, at least superficially, that it doesn’t mean anything, that they’re untouchable…..but deeper down, you get sucked in.
In that way, we all make our own particular hells.
XO
#6 by Revellian at February 8th, 2009
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H Miragi! It’s been a while since I’ve done any bartending, I’m pretty much living off guitar lessons–but may go back, the money is just too good. Lesson is learned!
I’ve come to the conclusion that heaven and hell are the same place–and we’re already in it
#7 by Miragi at February 8th, 2009
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Sounds like a reasonable conclusion, Bobby. But we can only stay in our self-concocted hells as long as we choose to
Sometimes I miss bartending….other days not so much
#8 by Revellian at February 8th, 2009
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Indeed Mi. I like a good mixture of heaven & hell in my everyday life–too much of one or the other makes Bob a dull boy. I’ll have a glass of pleasure with extra pain . . . on ice
#9 by Jane Doe at February 8th, 2009
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‘She read me like a Dr. Seuss book . . . easy I suppose’
The entire story was well-written, but I particularly enjoyed that line.
Sorry that you were hurt so badly. Sometimes the most beautiful ones are the most dangerous. They know that their beauty possesses you and controls you and they use that to their advantage.
#10 by Shameka at February 8th, 2009
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Oh boy do I feel your pain. *hugs*
#11 by Evelyn at February 8th, 2009
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I thought this was another one of your stories and I was waiting for the blood and gore, or something similar, to happen. At the end I thought, “Pffft, yeah right.” It was not until I read the comments and your response that I bought into it being reality.
I thought that only women saw love and sex as being so linked. I hear you! Here’s my comment: “That bitch! I hate her and all women like her!” Did I tell you I hate gold diggers? She obviously dug for and obtained her pot of gold (I certainly don’t think she earned it herself) and then added “user” to her list of attributes.
My analysis? She’s a aging mother who is jealous of her own daughter. Let’s add “sickening” to her attributes.
She could have set the rules and she could have refrained from humiliating you in front of the whole world. That sickening, gold-digging, old, plastic, user bitch!
There! I feel better.
#12 by Nina c. at February 8th, 2009
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aww that just made me so sad. I don’t know what else to say. life can be so cruel and unfair.
#13 by Revellian at February 8th, 2009
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@Jane: Thanks! Don’t be sorry, it happened years ago and I am over it. One thing I’ve discovered is that other attributes are equally sexy and attractive as surface beauty. Honesty is beautiful. True intent is sexy. Integrity is spectacular and a turn on.
@Shameka: Thank you! I’m not feeling the pain anymore, but still have the memories.
@Evelyn: This is a short story, but an arranged non-fiction one. I’ve known many women that after getting divorced in their thirties, go buck wild and have fun so to speak. I stood no chance from the beginning and should have known. I almost added in a some fiction and having me chop her up or something hahahaha!
@Nina: Even though I’ve had stuff like this happen, I still can’t say life is unfair–it’s what you make it, regardless of what actually happens. I could’ve said no and blown her off LOL!
#14 by Shinade at February 8th, 2009
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Just being honest Bobby…this is a drop and run. I don’t feel very well today. But, I needed your addy.
This story does sound very interesting though. I’ll be back tomorrow to read!!
Hugs,
Jackie:-)
#15 by Miss Moneypenny at February 8th, 2009
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Hi Bobby!
Do more love Scars,
Afflict men from Mars?
To forget this brief Hot affair, what did you flush down your oral toilet?
To cheer you up… Since external links drop my comment into the Black Hole of Spam, have U seen Warner Brothers comical response to the Christian Bale Tirade?
If not, enter “Warner Bros. Responds To Christian Bale Tirade – Comedy.com” at You Tube.
#16 by Revellian at February 9th, 2009
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@Jackie: I hope you feel better soon–I’ll be by to visit you shortly!
@Debbie: I’m not down at all…I’m filled with cheer! I flushed an entire roasted chicken and pitcher of iced-tea down my gullet! Haven’t seen that, but will check it out
#17 by Shemah at February 9th, 2009
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I thought this was one filled with blood and gore too. A real shame that it wasn’t. LOL! At least it would’ve been a satisfactory ending! hahahaa.. but your writing, again, was awesome.
#18 by Revellian at February 9th, 2009
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Thanks Shemah! I appreciate you reading so many articles today:)
Haha…I can’t have every tale involving people being razored into blood sodden strips of agony, peeling bodies open and bashing skulls in! Maybe next round
#19 by teeni at February 9th, 2009
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Aw, Bobby. This is sad. My heart wrenched for you as I could see where this was going. A hard lesson to learn.
#20 by meleah rebeccah at February 9th, 2009
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This sounds just like My Country Club!
And there is NO SUCH THING as No Strings Attached Sex!
#21 by paisley at February 9th, 2009
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please tell me this is fiction and you did not really believe this woman when she said she loved you……..
#22 by Jennifer at February 9th, 2009
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Bobby — Very vivid portrayal of what most people don’t see in the country club world, and of your part in it as observer, confidant, and, to some extent, participant. You definitely captured that rush of love and sex and heartbreak. I’m sorry it happened that way, but you conjured a story out of it.
And I wanted to say “Stay away from that woman! It’s a trap!” At the same time, it sounded very sweet (or at the very least intense) while it lasted, and that really is something.
#23 by Revellian at February 9th, 2009
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@Teeni: Perhaps it is sad, but the only way to really learn the lessons in life. On the other hand, 9 of 10 men would never get upset–they just move on to the next and think I was a fool for falling in love because of sex.
@Meleah: Well, I believe people do have no strings attached sex all the time–but I’m too emotional and can’t do it. I must be in love with someone who loves me or sex ain’t happening.
@Paisley: Of course not, but I was already heartbroken and wanted to be loved. It felt like love for a while. When you are desperate to be cared about, it’s difficult to see the truth.
@Jennifer: Thank you. This was one of many events that diminished my willingness to trust. Some of my guy friends say I see sex & love like a woman. I tell them they see sex & love like little boys. My parents taught me sex is not to be taken lightly or be casual–and this taught me why. I wish I could say the memories are fond, but they feel more like a nightmare. Reading your site–more than any other–inspired me to tell this in a story like fashion. See . . . I told you; your writing has influenced me.
#24 by Kima at February 10th, 2009
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oh boy oh boy!
I thought there was going to be a lot of fictional gore and body parts, but reading the first two para last night (yes I had to leave office in a hurry so couldn’t comment then) I knew this story was something else!
And of course the last line cleared things up.
Well written, well narrated, well described, everything interestingly described, hence the reason why I read it again just now even though I read it last night
I know I was expecting a lot of blood and gore and pain and disfigurement and death, but experiencing something like this must be even more painful than all that. And no offense intended to all the great supportive comments above me which are really good and warm, but as I believe I am the first guy to comment here, do trust me when I say I know how that feels like Bobby. I really do.
#25 by Revellian at February 10th, 2009
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Thank you Kima! I put some real effort in making this read like a complete short story.
It’s great to have a guy comment on this. I’ve often wondered why 95% of my readers are female–even of my hardcore horror–but I do love the ladies and their perspective. It’s amazing how most guys (probably) couldn’t understand the feeling. Most of my male friends would like nothing better than emotion free sex with no strings. You like women in the same way I do . . . which is treating them with respect and wanting real love
#26 by Grog at February 10th, 2009
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Nice…sex as a tool.
Classic!
#27 by meleah rebeccah at February 10th, 2009
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“Well, I believe people do have no strings attached sex all the time–but I’m too emotional and can’t do it”
I cant either. No way. Ive never been one to have casual sex. ever.
#28 by Revellian at February 10th, 2009
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Well I have Meleah, and I can’t say it was worth it–but I wouldn’t change my past even if I could